docs: fix spelling grammar and provide new suggs (#494)

* doc: fix spelling, minor grammar mistakes

also provided alternatives for "with transparent experience from users' perspective"
alternatives: 
1. provide users with transparency
2. provide a transparent experience for all users
3. transparent to users from all perspectives

* docs: apply suggestions from code review

Co-authored-by: xiaomin tang <xtang@users.noreply.github.com>
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## What is GreptimeDB
GreptimeDB is an open-source time-series database with special focus on
GreptimeDB is an open-source time-series database with a special focus on
scalability, analytical capabilities and efficiency. It's designed to work on
infrastructure of cloud era, and benefits from its elasticity and commodity
infrastructure of the cloud era, and users benefit from its elasticity and commodity
storage.
The core developers of GreptimeDB have been building time-series data platform
Our core developers have been building time-series data platform
for years. Based on their best-practices, GreptimeDB is born to give you:
- A standalone binary that scales to highly-available distributed cluster, with transparent experience from user's perspective
- Columnar data layout optimised for time-series, compacted, compressed, stored on various storage backends
- A standalone binary that scales to highly-available distributed cluster, providing a transparent experience for cluster users
- Optimized columnar layout for handling time-series data; compacted, compressed, stored on various storage backends
- Flexible index options, tackling high cardinality issues down
- Distributed parallel query execution, leveraging elastic computing resource
- Distributed, parallel query execution, leveraging elastic computing resource
- Native SQL, and Python scripting for advanced analytical scenarios
- Widely adopted database protocols and APIs
- Extensible table engine architecture for extensive workloads
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PRIMARY KEY(host)) ENGINE=mito WITH(regions=1);
```
3. Insert data:
3. Insert some data:
```SQL
INSERT INTO monitor(host, cpu, memory, ts) VALUES ('host1', 66.6, 1024, 1660897955000);
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ about Kubernetes deployment, check our [docs](https://greptime.com/docs).
INSERT INTO monitor(host, cpu, memory, ts) VALUES ('host3', 88.8, 4096, 1660897957000);
```
4. Query data:
4. Query the data:
```SQL
mysql> SELECT * FROM monitor;
@@ -147,8 +147,8 @@ evaluation. Do not use it in production at the moment.
## Community
The core team will be thrilled if you participate in any way you like. When you are stuck, try
asking for help by filing an issue with a detailed description of what you were trying to do
Our core team is thrilled too see you participate in any ways you like. When you are stuck, try to
ask for help by filling an issue with a detailed description of what you were trying to do
and what went wrong. If you have any questions or if you would like to get involved in our
community, please check out: